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Only When

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only when I start to think
about all the things said
then and now...
between love and hate lies
familiar massive spaces
there and now...

only when I start to live
after every death spent
another, another...
one change every cell
after time nothing recognizable
disposed,exposed...

only when I wake again
does this begin repeated screams
talk and talk...
spent words spill onto my feet
more replications of the same
details, details...

only when I understand it
run and run away as fast as I can
hatred and fear...
the sheeps' dead eyes stare
blank and numb, surrendered
waste, wasted...
still working on it...
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NonBeliever's avatar
this is beautiful ... your use of words is inspiring, especially
spent words spill onto my feet
more replications of the same
details, details...

just amazing ...
keep it up, it is great to know a fellow writer with a similar approach to the use of language ... :hug: